Brown Eyed Girl

I agree with silverfin713 a beautiful mix of emotion which is a very unique effect. Very definite poem and yet very ambiguous. Commas and full stops are very well used. ...

I love the contrast in the poem between the cold and warm. Very nicely done. Also I think the start of the poem and the end of the poem can ...

Well this poem there isn't really a pattern, its just things people have said to me or ive said or wanted to say to people. For example ' Sorry I'm ...

Nice idea. Well written but proof reading (something I deeply struggle with as well). I think both boys and girls can empathise with feeling like this so that's why it's ...

Hey again! Emotionally stunning! You're really deep, you should be writing romance novels! You should read that at their wedding I'm sure they'd love it. Amazing done Brown Eyed Girl ...

Hey, Very memorable poem nice rhythm and idea. Superb poem Brown Eyed Girl xx

Sorry just reading through notice meant to say meaningless and thanks for everyones comments trying hard to keep improve on my poems Peace to all my fellow writers :lol: Brown ...